I mentioned that my thumbnails were all over the place in Part I. This mostly didn't matter, aside from increasing my overall frustration with the process and slowing me down (not inconsequential over nearly six years), but did create several issues with paneling.

That's not even (much of) an exaggeration. Oh, I'd had various ideas bouncing around in my head for years, many of them loosely related to what would become Mortal No Longer, and in that regard this one was no exception.